Monday, June 16, 2014

Today Steve shared his story pyramid, in which the basis for all story ideas is the audience. When I teach composition, I am always telling my students to remember their audience and write accordingly. I am glad to now have a warranted reason to do the same thing with my journalism students.

When I started thinking about the audience of a high school publication, however, two things gave me pause:

1 – In the age of digital media, who really is the audience?  When the copies of a newspaper are handed out to the student body, the audience seems pretty clear. But when a staff is producing online news that literally anyone with internet access can read, the audience is (perhaps) widened. Of course, the audience should be at the root of the story; however, I imagine that defining the audience can be a bit trickier when a publication can be so widely read.

2 – If my writers think too much about what their audience wants, am I going to end up being the advisor of the next BuzzFeed? I can imagine my students deciding to shift the in-depth look at the process of hiring a new principal to “The Top 7 Things That Will Blow Your Mind About Our Hiring Process: You Won’t Believe What Happens In Number 3!” An article like this would appeal to our high school audience, yet I’d rather see a story where the journalism and writing are done right. 

Which brings me back to the essential point: the story isn’t worth covering if it doesn’t relate to the audience, but the journalism needs to build from there; all the other steps of the pyramid––reporting, writing, and editing––need to be accounted for.

Kari Koshiol
Benilde-St. Margaret’s
Minneapolis, Minn

2 comments:

  1. As important as giving the audience what they want to know is giving them what they need to know. Your'e a lot better at determining that than kids are, and that's why they need you. Your job matters.

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  2. I also think that students often don't necessarily see all the questions their target audience may want to see answered in their article or all the potential sources that could speak on an issue with authority and authenticity, so that's another huge aspect of the adviser's role.

    By answering these questions and taking these directions school newspapers maintain both a professional and informative imagine and take issues beyond sites like BuzzFeed and its contemporaries.

    Stephanie Floch
    Taylorsville High School
    Taylorsville, Utah

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